| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1102 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1102 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "steeled" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "sentinels" | | 6 | "fluttered" | | 7 | "ephemeral" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "maw" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "lurched" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "shattered" | | 15 | "flicked" | | 16 | "unravel" | | 17 | "fragmented" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1104 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 1095 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.37 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 4 | | Pub | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Cold | 1 | | Apoll | 1 | | Wyrd | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | You | 2 | | Yggdrasil | 1 | | Realms | 1 | | Old | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.623 | | wordCount | 1104 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the deep darkness of a burrow, but the shifting, ephemeral darkness of fabric moved by wind" | | 1 | "Not human, not really Fae, but some horror in between" | | 2 | "not really Fae, but some horror in between" | | 3 | "not behind, but ahead" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.30% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 50.18 | | std | 16.19 | | cv | 0.323 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 88 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 56 |
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| 94.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were terrified" |
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| 13.78% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | | 0 | "was stepping" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was running" | | 3 | "were getting" | | 4 | "was going" |
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| 57.14% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "And then that conversation they had shared when she told him of her possession - possession by the same thing that had compelled her here." | | 1 | "You ssshould-- Her back arched as she bolted upright and its eyes pierced the void behind her." | | 2 | "Phantasmal and indistinct, but she saw the shape of its mouth and tongue, and she knew what it wanted - a tithe of her essence." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1098 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.030054644808743168 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00819672131147541 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 11.04 | | std | 7.24 | | cv | 0.656 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 72.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.46 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 37.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere something was stepping through" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 95.56% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She gazed uneasily into the" | | 1 | "She was half tempted to" | | 2 | "She'd noticed it pulsing faintly" | | 3 | "She stumbled out of the" | | 4 | "It was beautiful in the" | | 5 | "She could feel the magic" | | 6 | "she whispered to the dark" | | 7 | "Her stomach lurched even as" | | 8 | "Her eyes strained at shadows," | | 9 | "Her own black curse of" | | 10 | "It was coming closer." | | 11 | "She didn't know what to" | | 12 | "Her hands squeezed her necklace" | | 13 | "Her breath sharpened, sharp and" | | 14 | "She jolted with the memory" | | 15 | "IT came out of the" | | 16 | "She didn't know what it" | | 17 | "Her hands curled into her" | | 18 | "She corrected herself." | | 19 | "Its eyes glowed pink as" |
| | ratio | 0.311 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The pounding of Aurora's heart" | | 1 | "She gazed uneasily into the" | | 2 | "The overgrown tendrils of thorny" | | 3 | "This was foolish." | | 4 | "A grove where the veil" | | 5 | "She was half tempted to" | | 6 | "A faint warmth emanating from" | | 7 | "She'd noticed it pulsing faintly" | | 8 | "The ancient oaks loomed like" | | 9 | "She stumbled out of the" | | 10 | "Moonlight broke through the treeline," | | 11 | "Wildflowers bloomed even here, defying" | | 12 | "Jade vines snaked through the" | | 13 | "It was beautiful in the" | | 14 | "The air felt too still," | | 15 | "Birdsong that should have been" | | 16 | "Something fluttered and hissed in" | | 17 | "A gnarled hand of oak" | | 18 | "The roots wound artfully into" | | 19 | "A coutil bedsheet curtains, fluttering" |
| | ratio | 0.711 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "If she left now, she" | | 1 | "However many things stood between" | | 2 | "What she was running from" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 75.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "And then that conversation they had shared when she told him of her possession - possession by the same thing that had compelled her here." | | 1 | "The ancient oaks loomed like sentinels on either side of the overgrown footpath, their massive trunks twisting into the gnarled standing stones that marked the …" | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed even here, defying the season's turn, breaking up the thick cobwebs that fluttered like gauzy lace in the breeze." | | 3 | "The roots wound artfully into branching patterns that her eyes kept trying to follow, rounding forward, spiraling inward into a yawning hole that disappeared in…" | | 4 | "She was going insane, parts of her mind snapping away like twigs." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |