| 100.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | |
| 54.9550% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 222 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.0000% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 222 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "tinged" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "echoing" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 20 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 20 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 20 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 8 | | mean | 27.63 | | std | 25.52 | | cv | 0.924 | | sampleLengths | | |
| 66.6667% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 20 | | matches | | 0 | "was tinged" | | 1 | "being watched" |
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| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 32 | | matches | | |
| 100.0000% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 213 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.028169014084507043 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018779342723004695 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 20 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 20 | | mean | 11.05 | | std | 7.99 | | cv | 0.723 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 |
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| 90.0000% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.6 | | totalSentences | 20 | | uniqueOpeners | 12 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "they screeched (screech)" |
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