Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPG42K67VPDP1MKT5JR6HY

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
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<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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The dim light of the old bar cast a greenish hue over the patrons. Down the well-worn wooden bar, a woman sat perched on a stool, her straight black hair falling about her shoulders. She nursed a pint glass, swirling the remaining amber liquid. Aurora Carter, known to most only as Rory, gazed into the depths of the glass as if searching for something. Her bright blue eyes, reminiscent of the oceans from her childhood in Wales, held a melancholy that belied her otherwise vibrant features. A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist peeked from beneath her sleeve — a memento of a childhood long since passed. Behind the bar, a man with neat, grey-streaked auburn hair worked, his hands moving with practiced ease. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner and a retired MI6 operative, made for an imposing figure, his broad shoulders and tidy beard lending him an air of quiet authority. Yet a slight limp in his left leg spoke to the sharp ends he'd weathered in his youth. A door swung open, sending a gust of cool London air into the dim space. In walked a man, his face etched with lines that seemed to bear the weight of a thousand sorrows. His hair, once a vibrant chestnut, had faded to a dull brown, while his eyes, once the color of a summer's day, now held a dull, lifeless gaze. Silas looked up from the glass he was polishing. His gaze settled on the newcomer, a flicker of recognition crossing his features. "Brendan," he called out, his voice low and steady. "Good to see you." The man, Brendan Carter — Aurora's estranged father — made his way down the bar, his eyes searching the darkened corners until they landed on Rory. She looked up, their gazes locking for a brief, uncomfortable moment before she glanced away, swirling her glass once more. Silas noted the tension between the two, a familiar kind of unease that spoke of a shared history and a thousand unspoken words. He frowned, his brows furrowing in concern. He'd seen this before, watched as time and regret had worn away at the bonds between loved ones. "Rory," Brendan said, his voice tight. "I saw you sitting here. Didn't expect to find you in a place like this." Rory looked up, her bright blue eyes hardening as they met her father's gaze. "It's a bar, Dad," she said, her tone sharp. "What were you expecting? A tiki bar in Tahiti?" Brendan sighed, running a hand through his weary hair. "No, of course not. I just meant, I didn't know you were in London." Rory snorted, taking a long pull from her pint. "A lot's changed since you left," she said, her words tinged with bitterness. "I'm not the same girl you used to know. None of us are." Silas watched the exchange, his eyes following the uncomfortable line of conversation with a practiced gaze. He knew the weight of unspoken regret, had seen it tear apart even the strongest of men. Brendan nodded, looking down at his hands. "I know," he said, his voice softening. "I just, I hoped to see you. To talk." Rory looked up, her eyes narrowing. "Talk?" she asked, a hint of challenge in her tone. "After all this time? You think a few words can wipe away the years of silence? The heartache?" Brendan looked up, his eyes searching. "No," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "I know it can't. But I owe you an explanation. I owe you the truth." Rory scoffed, shaking her head. "The truth?" she asked, her voice rising. "The truth is you left us. You left me. I don't care about your explanations." Silas watched as the tension between the two grew, the air in the bar heavy with the weight of their words. He knew all too well the pain that came from a fractured relationship, the unspoken regrets and the scars that never fully healed. "I know," Brendan said, his voice breaking. "I know I hurt you. I know I left. But I'm here now. I want to make things right." Rory looked up, her eyes meeting her father's. For a brief moment, Silas caught a glimpse of the girl she used to be, the one who had loved her father with a fierce, unrelenting love. But then she blinked, and the moment was gone, replaced by a hardened exterior that spoke of a broken heart and a guarded soul. "I don't know if I can forgive you," Rory said, her voice low. "I don't know if I want to." Brendan nodded, looking down at his hands once more. "I understand," he said, his voice soft. "I don't deserve your forgiveness. I know that. But I want to try. I want to make amends." Rory looked up, her eyes hardening once more. "Amends?" she asked, her tone sharp. "You think a few words can wipe away the years of hurt? The scars you left behind?" Brendan looked up, his eyes meeting Rory's. "No," he said, his voice low. "I know it can't. But I want to try. I want you in my life, Rory. I want to be a father to you." Rory looked away, her eyes clouding with tears. "It's too late," she said, her voice breaking. "Too much has happened. Too much has changed." Silas watched as the two struggled with their words, the pain of their past and the weight of their present settling heavy on their shoulders. He knew the pain of a fractured relationship, had seen it tear apart even the strongest of men. But he also knew the power of forgiveness, the way it could heal even the deepest of wounds. "I know it's hard," Silas said, his voice low and steady. "But sometimes, the hardest things are the most important. Forgiveness isn't easy, but it's necessary. It's the only way to move forward." Rory looked up, her eyes meeting Silas's. For a brief moment, he caught a glimpse of the vulnerability beneath her hardened exterior, the pain she carried within her. "It's not that simple," she said, her voice soft. "It's not just about forgiveness. It's about trust. And truth." Brendan nodded, looking down at his hands once more. "I know," he said, his voice low. "But I want to try. I want to tell you the truth, the whole truth. About why I left. About what happened." Rory looked up, her eyes narrowing. "What could you possibly say?" she asked, her tone sharp. "What excuse could you have for abandoning me? For leaving me to pick up the pieces?" Brendan looked up, his eyes meeting Rory's. For a brief moment, Silas caught a glimpse of the pain behind his eyes, the weight of his own regrets. "I know," he said, his voice soft. "I know I hurt you. I know I left. But I can explain. I can try to make things right." Rory looked away, her eyes clouding with tears once more. "I don't know if I'm ready," she said, her voice breaking. "I don't know if I can handle the truth." Brendan reached out, his hand resting on Rory's shoulder. "I understand," he said, his voice low. "I know it's hard. But I want to try. I want to make things right. Even if it means facing the pain of the past." Rory looked up, her eyes meeting her father's. For a brief moment, Silas caught a glimpse of the girl she used to be, the one who had loved her father with a fierce, unrelenting love. But then she blinked, and the moment was gone, replaced by a hardened exterior that spoke of a broken heart and a guarded soul. "I don't know if I'm ready," she said, her voice soft. "But maybe...maybe we can try. Maybe we can start small. With baby steps." Brendan nodded, a small smile playing at the corners of his mouth. "I'd like that," he said, his voice low. "I'd like to try. To rebuild what we lost." Silas watched as the two struggled with their words, the pain of their past and the weight of their present settling heavy on their shoulders. He knew the power of forgiveness, the way it could heal even the deepest of wounds. But he also knew the journey was long, the path fraught with obstacles and pitfalls. But as he looked at the two, their eyes meeting in a moment of fragile understanding, he saw a glimmer of hope. A chance to heal the scars of the past and forge a new path forward. And perhaps, in the end, that was the greatest gift of all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said, his voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
93.0939% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1448
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1448
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"imposing"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count3
4
word"fractured"
count2
5
word"furrowing"
count1
6
word"weight"
count6
7
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"flicker"
2"imposing"
3"unspoken"
4"fractured"
5"furrowing"
6"weight"
7"etched"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count2
highlights
0"the weight of their words"
1"a flicker of recognition"
2"a glimmer of hope"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"like that,\" he"
59.0659% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean38.11
std13.59
cv0.357
sampleLengths
044
164
263
362
435
546
648
721
832
923
1035
1133
1223
1334
1430
1527
1644
1726
1859
1920
2034
2131
2237
2324
2461
2533
2647
2738
2832
2954
3030
3141
3259
3324
3429
3556
3637
3712
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs165
matches
0"was polishing"
88.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1028
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"neat, grey-streaked auburn"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.033073929961089495
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0038910505836575876
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean13.79
std6.48
cv0.47
sampleLengths
014
120
210
320
422
522
617
728
818
915
1019
1128
129
1313
149
154
1626
1720
1823
197
2018
216
2215
2314
249
259
269
2714
289
2913
3013
3116
3217
337
347
359
366
3710
3818
396
409
4115
425
437
4415
4521
4623
477
4819
498
37.6190% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2571428571428571
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners27
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he called out, his voice low and steady (call out)"
1"she said, her words tinged with bitterness (say, tinged)"
2"he said, his voice softening (say, soften)"
3"Brendan said, his voice breaking (say, break)"
4"she said, her voice breaking (say, break)"
5"she said, her voice breaking (say, break)"
84.9674%