| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1163 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.91% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1163 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "spectral" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "flicked" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "anticipating" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "racing" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.05% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1164 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.67% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Time later, Rory snapped awake on frozen ground, spit bubbling in her mouth and lungs burning." |
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| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1131 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Rory | 15 | | Shaking | 1 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Shaking" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.837 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.57% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 61.26 | | std | 23.04 | | cv | 0.376 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 73 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 80 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 116 | | 16 | 82 | | 17 | 85 | | 18 | 73 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 220 | | matches | | |
| 52.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Atop pale skin, Rory noticed a mark she had missed before - a tiny tattoo of an eye at the edge of the woman's wrist bone." | | 1 | "The first thought that came to her--What magic is this?" | | 2 | "A hush came over the grove; a attentive weight, the expectation of change." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 433 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.009237875288683603 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004618937644341801 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 12.25 | | std | 6.56 | | cv | 0.535 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 76.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4842105263157895 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of stopping, she flowed" | | 1 | "Then from right to left" | | 2 | "Perhaps five minutes later, she" | | 3 | "Then she walked." | | 4 | "Slowly, careful not to startle" |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She shivered, tugging her jacket" | | 1 | "Her breath parted in a" | | 2 | "She emerged with the red" | | 3 | "Her smile twisted into a" | | 4 | "She swam for an hour," | | 5 | "She squinted into the distance" | | 6 | "She ceased swimming and instead" | | 7 | "She punched gibberish into her" | | 8 | "It smashed upwards out of" | | 9 | "Her belly was short and" | | 10 | "She sucked her thumb and" | | 11 | "You control blood flow." | | 12 | "She squeezed her eyes closed" | | 13 | "She lay still, waiting for" | | 14 | "You are safe." | | 15 | "Her face softened and the" | | 16 | "She rolled onto her side" | | 17 | "She shook her head at" | | 18 | "She sensed her clothes were" | | 19 | "She walked into the forest." |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped out of the" | | 1 | "Mist swirled at the edge" | | 2 | "She shivered, tugging her jacket" | | 3 | "The figure stood motionless, head" | | 4 | "Moonlight glimmered off the clasp" | | 5 | "Rory stepped closer and knelt" | | 6 | "The woman lifted a bone-white" | | 7 | "An unseen wind carried the" | | 8 | "Her breath parted in a" | | 9 | "The Fae woman floated closer" | | 10 | "Warmth sank into Rory's skin" | | 11 | "The otherworldly touch left a" | | 12 | "Rory managed to say" | | 13 | "The zipper screamed as she" | | 14 | "She emerged with the red" | | 15 | "Rory held it out, watching" | | 16 | "A manicured nail appeared, drawing" | | 17 | "The woman grasped the bright" | | 18 | "Her smile twisted into a" | | 19 | "An explosion of light burst" |
| | ratio | 0.67 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "While she indulged the delusion" | | 1 | "Though in the grayscale forest," |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "When it came, she forced herself to breathe through her nose, picturing the blood cloud seeping out and cohering into a shape." | | 1 | "Aurora froze as sweat ran down her face, setting her bruise scars to purpling." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |