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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPGY08SZYF92XWVHD7QSM0
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Model:
Rocinante 12B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
42.9s
Cost:
$0.000791
Provider:
NextBit
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Rory stepped out of the shadows between two oaks, into a clearing. Mist swirled at the edge of her vision, masking the ancient standing stones that marked the boundary of the hidden space dwelled upon by spirits and Fae. Cold
hung in the air
like a damp shroud. She shivered, tugging her jacket tight. In the center of the grove, the night pooled black around the faint shape of a person. The figure stood motionless, head bowed, thin
spectral
hands clasped at the waist. Moonlight glimmered off the clasp of a laurel wreath perched atop long, white hair. Rory stepped closer and knelt with a grunt, setting down her backpack. "Hellos." The woman lifted a bone-white face and smiled with eyes empty of pupil or iris. "Momento mori, Aurora Carter." An unseen wind carried the specter's whisper through the trees. Rory swallowed. "I'm here. Let's talk." Her breath parted in a cloud. The Fae woman floated closer until she almost touched Rory's outstretched fingers. Face calm and pale, she touched a nail to Rory's cheek. Warmth sank into Rory's skin as the nail
glided
downward, tracing her jawline before stopping at the hollow of her throat. The
otherworldly
touch left a track of tingling warmth. "I have things," Rory
managed to
say. Shaking hands fumbled in her pocket. Brrngg… The zipper screamed as she jerked open her backpack, digging past the whiskey and rope. She emerged with the red heartstone, suspended on its silver chain. "Take this back." Rory held it out, watching it swing heavily, aware it had a life of its own. aramoured eyes followed the movement. A manicured nail appeared, drawing Rory's attention to a slender wrist. Atop pale skin, Rory noticed a mark she had missed before - a tiny tattoo of an eye at the edge of the woman's wrist bone. The woman grasped the bright stone and pushed it into Rory's hand. "No! This is the anchor." Her smile twisted into a sneer. An explosion of light burst from the stone, engulfing Rory and everything in the grove in a crimson glow. Heat roared into her cheeks. In an instant, the heat died, replaced by a falling chill that stung her face. Every hair on Rory's body stood on end as the cold crept into her flesh and brittle bones. The grove disappeared, swallowed by absolute darkness. Time later, Rory snapped awake on frozen ground, spit bubbling in her mouth and lungs burning. Tangled hair clung to her skin as she
tried to
heave herself up on hands resembling two frozen talons. Pinbrights of color seared her retinas: purples, blues, greens flashing up from the darkness below. The pain ebbed to a tolerable
throb
behind her eyes. Birds' wings
flicked
in the sky as darkness closed in on the horizon. Unable to orient herself vertically, Rory swam through the air towards the light. When her hands and feet splashed into grass, she realized she
was swimming
in the air. Instead of stopping, she flowed forward, a mixture of swimming and flight. The first thought that came to her--What magic is this? She swam for an hour, listening to the rhythmic vacuum of her strong strokes and gulping her own air, gradually propelled forward as an invisible hand pushed her from behind. Anticipating flight, she looked left and right, spreading her
weight
across her swimming plane. When she didn't miss a beat, change
began to
set in. The motion lacked a sense of forward propulsion, but her physical sensation of movement. While she indulged the delusion for an hour further, taking stock of her changing crowds, she accelerated from front to back, like swimming in a wind. Then from right to left at an increasing rate, powerful kicks pushing her forward at a gut-wrenching speed. Aurora squinted skyward, and for the first time noticed the capricious vacuum of light and shadow relentlessly thrown over the grove. She squinted into the distance and swallowed. Am I on a collision course with the sun? A hush came over the grove; a attentive
weight
, the expectation of change. When the vibrations tore loose and filled the grove with tremors, Aurora twisted left, right then forward, throwing her head back in a wail. The ground disappeared below. She ceased swimming and instead
tried to
sail downwards, desperately grabbing each cloud to slow her fall. As her fall increased in speed, the grove shrank, soon resembling a black prune in the center of a much larger planet. The vacuum of stars and galaxies wheeled wildly in the background, unnaturally close. Panic exploded in Aurora's chest. She punched gibberish into her phone, furiously entering directions forward, then she threw it at the approaching wall of white. It smashed upwards out of sight, racing ahead while she fell backwards, unable to pull up until her knees slammed into the ground. Aurora groaned at a stomach cramp. Her belly was short and taut. She sucked her thumb and bit into the pain in quick strokes, trying to focus past the low headache threatening behind her eyes. Don't lose control. You control blood flow. As she pictured exiting the blood clouds, the pressure continued, making her palms sweat. Take deep breaths. Let yourself bleed. She squeezed her eyes closed as the panic ebbed but scarified across her face. The grove boomed from beyond. She lay still, waiting for the next surge of pressure. When it came, she forced herself to breathe through her nose, picturing the blood cloud seeping out and cohering into a shape. You are safe. Perhaps five minutes later, she
began to
relax. Her face softened and the scars which once resembled a web of lightning morphed into puckered, fleshy circles. She rolled onto her side and stood
slowly
, feeling her body stretch. She shook her head at one last sharp pain. Then she walked. Grass pressed against her toes. She sensed her clothes were on fire and stripped them off, revealing a lithe body with deep purple bruises down both legs. She walked into the forest. The first animal she laid eyes on destroyed her easy focus. It was a huge brown boar, tusks
gleaming
on an upturned snout, parallel streaks of lightning kindled along its back. It pawed the earth in an aggressive manner, stretching on tiptoe to sniff her baggy maid's tunic. Slowly, careful not to startle it, Aurora lifted the pistol from her sling and aimed at its head. Her hand shook violently. Kill, she thought. Though in the grayscale forest, it was impossible to identify her target. The boar sensed her and wheeled around, crouching and snorting. Aurora froze as sweat ran down her face, setting her bruise scars to purpling. Her finger tightened on the trigger. When the shot went off, the pig thudded to the forest floor. A ring of blown-off skin puffed around its head. She stared at it, not breathing. She has no idea what it was, where it came from, or why she shot it.
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2/17/2026, 2:23:44 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
82.8473%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1166
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
highlights
0
"slowly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
31.3894%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1166
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"throb"
count
1
1
word
"flicked"
count
1
2
word
"gleaming"
count
1
3
word
"glided"
count
1
4
word
"spectral"
count
1
5
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
2
highlights
0
"throb"
1
"flicked"
2
"gleaming"
3
"glided"
4
"spectral"
5
"otherworldly"
6
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
94
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
94
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"managed to"
1
"tried to"
2
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
95
matches
(empty)
64.5721%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
19
mean
61.26
std
23.04
cv
0.376
sampleLengths
0
54
1
86
2
12
3
53
4
59
5
42
6
23
7
64
8
73
9
51
10
55
11
58
12
50
13
80
14
48
15
116
16
82
17
85
18
73
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
94
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
222
matches
0
"was swimming"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1146
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.02617801047120419
lyAdverbCount
13
lyAdverbRatio
0.011343804537521814
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
95
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
95
mean
12.25
std
6.56
cv
0.535
sampleLengths
0
12
1
27
2
9
3
6
4
17
5
13
6
14
7
12
8
1
9
15
10
14
11
2
12
10
13
12
14
11
15
21
16
9
17
7
18
6
19
1
20
15
21
11
22
19
23
5
24
11
25
26
26
12
27
11
28
19
29
5
30
15
31
18
32
7
33
16
34
19
35
15
36
10
37
13
38
13
39
16
40
12
41
10
42
30
43
14
44
11
45
14
46
26
47
18
48
21
49
7
76.4912%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.4842105263157895
totalSentences
95
uniqueOpeners
46
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Rory managed to say (manage say)"
85.6059%