| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 65.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1160 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "utterly" | | 5 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1160 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "footfall" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "looming" | | 10 | "crystalline" | | 11 | "raced" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "beacon" | | 16 | "unraveling" | | 17 | "gleaming" | | 18 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "d with panic" | | 1 | "the surge of dread" |
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| 86.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1142 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1101 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.45 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Earth | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Eva | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.773 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a warning" | | 1 | "seemed embedded in the air itself" | | 2 | "not quite matching the shapes they should have" | | 3 | "as if eavesdropping" | | 4 | "seemed alive" | | 5 | "melody that seemed to speak only to her, unraveling patience and reason" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.876 | | wordCount | 1142 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just thriving but watching, waiting" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 34.61 | | std | 21.17 | | cv | 0.612 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 64 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 41 |
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| 94.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was hidden" | | 2 | "was sheltered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.157 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove was supposed to be a haven—a place half-forgotten by the modern world, a pocket threaded between Earth and something else." | | 1 | "There it was—the sensation prickling at the back of her neck—the unmistakable feeling of eyes watching, measuring, waiting." | | 2 | "This was the Grove; time flowed strangely here." | | 3 | "Nothing visible—just earth and roots tangled deep." | | 4 | "A soft footfall disturbed the silence—a sound too heavy and deliberate for a fleeing animal." | | 5 | "For a moment, something moved there—looming, shifting—it seemed to regard her with an unfamiliar sentience." | | 6 | "Rory blinked; there was nothing, just the swaying branches." | | 7 | "And something else lingered past the veil—flickering at the edge of sight, impossible to grasp." | | 8 | "Then came a shift—the softest brush of movement behind the stones." | | 9 | "Something glided from the shadows—a flash of iridescent light, a pale limb like spun glass disappearing between two ancient oaks." | | 10 | "Rory felt the skin on her neck prick beneath the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a mark that tingled with strange electricity." | | 11 | "It was a beacon—too strong to ignore now." | | 12 | "Suddenly, the soft song changed—the fragile melody turning discordant, a twisted lullaby that pried at the edges of her sanity with invisible fingers." | | 13 | "She didn’t want to believe the stories—the old warnings about beings halfway between dream and nightmare that haunted these ancient oaks." | | 14 | "A sudden snap—something breaking against stone—jerked Rory out of her spiraling fear." | | 15 | "With one last steadying breath, she stepped forward—deeper into the night where time warped and old magic held sway—heartbeat echoing in time with the pendant’s restless glow." |
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| 95.30% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 156 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.03205128205128205 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02564102564102564 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 11.2 | | std | 6.65 | | cv | 0.594 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 46.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3235294117647059 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard it: an" | | 1 | "Then came a shift—the softest" | | 2 | "Suddenly, the soft song changed—the" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here because" | | 1 | "She halted, fingers tightening around" | | 2 | "She swallowed hard." | | 3 | "Her voice barely broke the" | | 4 | "She reminded herself: no panic." | | 5 | "She couldn’t afford to lose" | | 6 | "It felt closer to the" | | 7 | "Her eyes darted to the" | | 8 | "She rose slowly, every nerve" | | 9 | "It was beautiful, and utterly" | | 10 | "Her voice was steadier, but" | | 11 | "She whipped around, searching for" | | 12 | "She brought her other hand" | | 13 | "Its bark was rough but" | | 14 | "she whispered to herself, fighting" | | 15 | "It was a beacon—too strong" | | 16 | "She didn’t want to believe" | | 17 | "Her heart leapt as her" | | 18 | "They blinked once, then slipped" | | 19 | "She grasped it tighter, the" |
| | ratio | 0.237 | |
| 40.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter’s boots pressed softly" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "The wildflowers at her feet," | | 3 | "The Grove was supposed to" | | 4 | "Something ancient, something ineffable." | | 5 | "She had come here because" | | 6 | "An obscure clue tucked into" | | 7 | "A whisper from Eva, urgent" | | 8 | "Something about the Heartstone Pendant" | | 9 | "A warmth she usually found" | | 10 | "Rory’s bright blue eyes scanned" | | 11 | "The clearing stretched out, wild" | | 12 | "She halted, fingers tightening around" | | 13 | "She swallowed hard." | | 14 | "Her voice barely broke the" | | 15 | "Rory’s breath came shallow and" | | 16 | "She reminded herself: no panic." | | 17 | "This was the Grove; time" | | 18 | "A sharp breath taken now" | | 19 | "She couldn’t afford to lose" |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter’s boots pressed softly into the thick carpet of moss that blanketed the earth, each step swallowed by the dense quiet of The Fae Grove." | | 1 | "The clearing stretched out, wild and shimmering under the subtle sway of fae magic that seemed embedded in the air itself." | | 2 | "It felt closer to the ground, as if connected to something buried beneath the roots that curled through the soil." | | 3 | "The standing stones themselves seemed to lean subtly inward, as if eavesdropping." | | 4 | "Rory felt the skin on her neck prick beneath the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a mark that tingled with strange electricity." | | 5 | "Suddenly, the soft song changed—the fragile melody turning discordant, a twisted lullaby that pried at the edges of her sanity with invisible fingers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |