| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the night swallowed immediately [immediately]" | | 1 | "the whisper—asked again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.889 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 86.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1137 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1137 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "racing" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "quivered" | | 16 | "charged" | | 17 | "raced" | | 18 | "echoed" | | 19 | "chill" | | 20 | "oppressive" | | 21 | "weight" | | 22 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.26% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1120 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1085 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.92 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Aurora | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like fingernails dragging across b" | | 1 | "felt like a whisper from something unse" | | 2 | "not quite animal either" | | 3 | "as if studying her" | | 4 | "not quite a figure, more a flicker of shapes and colors that shimmered at the edge of perception, vanish, then reappear somewhere else" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.893 | | wordCount | 1120 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 26.05 | | std | 14.29 | | cv | 0.549 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 26 |
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| 94.06% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "being hunted" | | 2 | "being watched" | | 3 | "was tempered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.168 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, feeling its faint warmth pulsing against her collarbone—a strange comfort amid unease." | | 1 | "The wildflowers were still blooming, absurdly bright under the moonlight, their colors almost unnatural—deep crimsons and vivid blues that should have faded weeks ago." | | 2 | "Not a bird—too hushed, too deliberate." | | 3 | "A shape skittered between the trunks—too quick, too silent." | | 4 | "She could hear her heartbeat, an insistent thump inside her chest, loud enough to drown the subtle sounds—the low whispering, almost voices, tangled with the sighing wind." | | 5 | "Her pulse thrummed like a drumbeat—steady, then erratic." | | 6 | "She blinked—gone." | | 7 | "The grove felt wrong—too alive." | | 8 | "The Grove was ancient, yes—but none of the stories had prepared her for this feeling of being hunted, of being watched by something that shouldn’t exist." | | 9 | "A shape emerged—a black silhouette too tall, too slender to be human, but not quite animal either." | | 10 | "The thing began to move—slowly, deliberately—like smoke drifting, dissipating and then reforming." | | 11 | "She could see now—eyes that gleamed like molten silver, unblinking." | | 12 | "“Why are you here?” the voice—or the whisper—asked again, velvet smooth and terrible." | | 13 | "Not human, not joyful—something ancient and mocking." | | 14 | "Among the wildflowers, movement—not quite a figure, more a flicker of shapes and colors that shimmered at the edge of perception, vanish, then reappear somewhere else." | | 15 | "She couldn’t turn back—not now." |
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| 79.02% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1103 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.057116953762466005 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014505893019038985 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 11.79 | | std | 6.81 | | cv | 0.578 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 58.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.37894736842105264 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 72.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she moved deeper, following" | | 1 | "Only silence answered, then the" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 93.91% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened the silver chain" | | 1 | "She tightened her jacket, the" | | 2 | "She shouldn't have come here." | | 3 | "She shifted forward, pushing past" | | 4 | "She knew it did here," | | 5 | "Her footsteps faltered as a" | | 6 | "She turned, eyes scanning the" | | 7 | "Her voice was a brittle" | | 8 | "She took a deep breath," | | 9 | "she whispered, more to herself" | | 10 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 11 | "She could hear her heartbeat," | | 12 | "She reached out, fingertips grazing" | | 13 | "She whipped around." | | 14 | "Her pulse thrummed like a" | | 15 | "she told herself, but the" | | 16 | "Her bright blue eyes darted," | | 17 | "She squeezed her eyes shut," | | 18 | "It lingered just beyond the" | | 19 | "Her mind raced." |
| | ratio | 0.315 | |
| 36.09% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter’s boots crunched against" | | 1 | "Night had settled like a" | | 2 | "She tightened the silver chain" | | 3 | "The ancient oaks marking the" | | 4 | "Aurora’s breath fogged in the" | | 5 | "She tightened her jacket, the" | | 6 | "She shouldn't have come here." | | 7 | "The grove was supposed to" | | 8 | "Eva had insisted, her voice" | | 9 | "The wildflowers were still blooming," | | 10 | "The air was thick with" | | 11 | "She shifted forward, pushing past" | | 12 | "She knew it did here," | | 13 | "An hour inside could be" | | 14 | "The thought frayed her nerves." | | 15 | "Something was wrong, she could" | | 16 | "Her footsteps faltered as a" | | 17 | "She turned, eyes scanning the" | | 18 | "A shape skittered between the" | | 19 | "The pulse at her neck" |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 54.35% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "If only she could remember" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, feeling its faint warmth pulsing against her collarbone—a strange comfort amid unease." | | 1 | "She tightened her jacket, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist tingling as if the night itself recognized her." | | 2 | "The wildflowers were still blooming, absurdly bright under the moonlight, their colors almost unnatural—deep crimsons and vivid blues that should have faded wee…" | | 3 | "The air was thick with scent, floral and heavy, yet there was a sour undertone, something rotting beneath the sweetness that made Aurora wrinkle her nose." | | 4 | "Another rustle, closer, this time with a brittle whisper that had no shape but spoke deep in her bones, a soft scrape that felt like fingernails dragging across…" | | 5 | "The trees themselves groaned, branches groveling as if under pressure." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had, her voice low and urgent over the phone," | | 1 | "she whispered, more to herself than anyone else" | | 2 | "she told, but the sensation clung" | | 3 | "she said, voice firmer than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva had (have)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "a voice hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |