| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1065 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "cautiously" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1065 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "raced" | | 11 | "throbbed" | | 12 | "chilling" | | 13 | "rhythmic" | | 14 | "tracing" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "ephemeral" | | 17 | "pulse" | | 18 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1045 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1033 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 14.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed watchful their trunks blotched black with ancient scars, knotting like the veins in the skin of old hands" | | 1 | "seemed woven with secrets, but tonight it bore a different scent: unease" | | 2 | "as if bowing to an unseen force" | | 3 | "not quite beast—a being shaped of half-recognized dreams and nightmares" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.957 | | wordCount | 1045 | | matches | | 0 | "not human, but not quite beast" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 24.3 | | std | 16.43 | | cv | 0.676 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.144 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed faintly with warmth—a heartbeat in the chill—a quiet reassurance, though tonight its glow seemed dimmer, subdued." | | 1 | "Time felt different here—it always did—but this was worse, the seconds dragging with insidious weight." | | 2 | "Her fingers brushed the pendant—warm, almost soothing amid the cold." | | 3 | "A flicker beyond the trees—movement at the edge of her sight." | | 4 | "But Eva’s note was clear—answers were here, in this place." | | 5 | "Steps crunching nearby—soft but deliberate." | | 6 | "A soft, rhythmic tapping came now, like long fingernails tracing bark—too slow for a creature at pace, too regular to be nature’s doing." | | 7 | "Shadows peeled off the trees, forming shapes—figures bent and shifting like smoke—just at the edge of where moonlight dared venture." | | 8 | "A flicker from the pendant—warmth pulsing stronger, warring with the chill in the air." | | 9 | "Tall, impossibly slender, draped in tattered robes of shadow and moonlight, eyes luminescent—not human, but not quite beast—a being shaped of half-recognized dreams and nightmares." | | 10 | "Its gaze held centuries—a hunger wrapped in silence." | | 11 | "But here—alone, vulnerable, exposed—escaping this place might mean never uncovering the truth she’d sought." | | 12 | "The figure vanished—dissolving into the night air—as if it had been nothing but a dream spun from shadow and fear." | | 13 | "Yet beneath her skin, the cold lingered—persistent, unwelcome." |
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| 90.09% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1057 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.04446546830652791 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017029328287606435 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 10.77 | | std | 6.91 | | cv | 0.641 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 59.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.38144329896907214 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Only swaying branches and the" | | 1 | "Only silence answered." | | 2 | "Then a figure emerged from" | | 3 | "Then the wind stilled." |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed faintly with warmth—a" | | 1 | "She’d come for a reason." | | 2 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 3 | "she said, voice low, steadier" | | 4 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 5 | "Her fingers brushed the pendant—warm," | | 6 | "Her heart jumped, twisting tight" | | 7 | "She forced herself to breathe," | | 8 | "She turned quickly again." | | 9 | "She swallowed hard, trying to" | | 10 | "She froze, straining to pinpoint" | | 11 | "Her eyes searched through dense" | | 12 | "she called, voice firmer this" | | 13 | "It grew brighter, casting slender" | | 14 | "She stepped cautiously toward the" | | 15 | "Her skin prickled as the" | | 16 | "It didn’t speak." | | 17 | "It needed no words." | | 18 | "Its gaze held centuries—a hunger" | | 19 | "Her hand moved to the" |
| | ratio | 0.264 | |
| 58.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the ancient" | | 1 | "The night air was cool" | | 2 | "A thin silver chain rested" | | 3 | "It pulsed faintly with warmth—a" | | 4 | "She’d come for a reason." | | 5 | "Eva’s voice echoed in her" | | 6 | "Something was wrong." | | 7 | "The grove stretched out before" | | 8 | "The soft shimmer of wildflowers" | | 9 | "Aurora paused, looking up through" | | 10 | "The moon was a ragged" | | 11 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 12 | "A rustle slid beyond the" | | 13 | "she said, voice low, steadier" | | 14 | "The forest swallowed her words," | | 15 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 16 | "The night pressed heavily, tactile" | | 17 | "Time felt different here—it always" | | 18 | "Her fingers brushed the pendant—warm," | | 19 | "A soft thump, distant yet" |
| | ratio | 0.802 | |
| 54.95% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "If anything, the trees seemed" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 18.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, the faint crackle of underbrush underfoot the only sound at fi…" | | 1 | "The night air was cool and fragrant, heavy with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed year-round here, a softness that felt foreign, almost out of place beneath…" | | 2 | "The grove stretched out before her, a clearing rimmed with towering oaks that wove their tangled limbs like protective arms, but the usual comfort of nature’s c…" | | 3 | "The wildflowers bent subtly, as if bowing to an unseen force." | | 4 | "Her hand moved to the pendant, feeling its warmth burn through nerves that screamed to flee, but she stood rooted, heart a fierce beacon in the suffocating dark…" | | 5 | "The whispers swirled, forming melodies that were beautiful and terrible all at once." | | 6 | "The figure slowly extended a hand, and the pendant’s crimson light flared, casting eerie shadows that danced wildly beneath the ancient oaks." | | 7 | "She reached up, tracing the crescent scar on her wrist, grounding herself to the here and now." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice low, steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "she called, voice firmer this time" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |