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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQZ7NVQW5GMFRS8T5JW60B
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Model:
GPT-4.1 Mini
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
14.9s
Cost:
$0.002471
Provider:
OpenAI
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The Raven’s Nest breathed its usual low sigh beneath the green neon
flicker
that hovered like a ghost above the doorframe. Inside,
the air was thick with
the scent of spilled whiskey, worn leather, and a faint undercurrent of smoked oak. Walls adorned with faded maps and cracked black-and-white photographs watched silently over the scattered crowd of late-night patrons. Aurora sat on a creaking barstool, fingers wrapped around a glass of dim amber, the foil top of cold ginger beer pushed aside beside it. Her bright blue eyes scanned a dog-eared paperback she’d pulled from her satchel, but the words blurred before her. Outside, the world swirled with hurried
footsteps
and flashing taxis, but here she
was anchored
by silence. Shoulder-length black hair hung straight, framing a face that had been both resolutely shut and quietly searching these past months. The bar drawn near midnight, voices hushed and laughter fewer, the door creaked open with the hesitant familiarity of old regrets, and in stepped Silas Blackwood. Si was unmistakable—tall with that silver-streaked auburn hair fallen more heavily to gray these days, beard meticulously trimmed. Even with the slight limp that played against his left leg—a distant wound from secrets better left buried—he carried himself with the quiet authority that spoke of a thousand battles fought in shadows. The silver signet ring gleamed briefly under the low light as he removed his dark coat and scanned the room. His gaze settled on the figure near the back, the one that didn’t quite fit with the usual nocturnal hum. It was Aurora—Rory to those who remembered her less formally. He hadn’t seen her since those uncertain days before the world spun sideways, before she’d packed her bags and slipped through the cracks of a life that had hardened her. He approached, deliberate but cautious, as if crossing the threshold between memory and reality demanded care. “Aurora Carter,” he said
gently
, his voice a deep timbre rich with surprise and something else—longing, perhaps. She looked up, startled first, then a faint
flicker
of recognition glimmering behind her cool-blue eyes. “Silas Blackwood.” Her voice was steady, but the old nickname, the familiar sharpness in her tone, softened as if warming with an ember long forgotten. “I didn’t expect to find you here.” He smiled—an old, measured smile that crept
slowly
but reached his eyes. “I could say the same to you.” Their history felt like a thread pulling taut between them, stretched thin over the years filled with
unspoken
truths. He pulled out the stool beside hers, settling with the ease of old habit. “How long has it been?” Silas asked, eyes resting for a moment on the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—one he remembered well from the reckless scrapes of childhood. “Too long.” She exhaled, fingers brushing the scar reflexively. “You look… different.” “And you look the same, and
completely
changed.” He laughed
softly
. “Life does that to us, doesn’t it?” Aurora nodded, setting aside the book. “Yeah. It does.” Silence folded between them, not uncomfortable but heavy with the
weight
of all that had passed. Around them, The Raven’s Nest murmured—inconsequential buzz punctuated by ice clinking
softly
against glass. “What brought you to London?” Silas finally asked, voice lowered as if sharing a secret. She hesitated. “Eva. She reached out after... everything.” Her eyebrows knit in a way that caught a shadow of old wounds. “I needed out.” Silas noted the absence of a name she didn’t speak—the one she had fled. The ghost Evan hovered just beyond the edges of their conversation, an uninvited ghost story neither wished to tell tonight. “And work?” His hazel eyes searched hers. “A part-time gig at the Golden Empress. Delivery. It’s… temporary.” She almost smiled but caught herself. “How about you? Still running the Nest?” “Every night.” He gestured around the dim room. “I’d be surprised if half my contacts still think I’m retired.” For a moment, she allowed herself to imagine the life this place sheltered beneath its battered maps and guarded smiles. The faint limp, the signal of battles past—both his and hers—gnawed silently at the space between what was and what had become. “Do you ever regret it?” she asked
suddenly
, voice
barely above a whisper
. “Leaving?” he answered with a shake of his head. “No. But sometimes I regret what we left behind.” She tilted her head, interpreting the meaning in his words. “The people? The choices?” He reached into his coat pocket, pulling out the silver signet ring he always wore on his right hand. Spinning it between his fingers, he said, “You and me. What we were then, what we could have been.” She stared at him, caught off-guard. “I went looking for you once,” he admitted, voice raw with restraint. “After Prague. You’d disappeared.” “I didn’t want to be found.” Her gaze hardened. “Not then.” “When I think about that night…” His eyes darkened with memory, “I wonder if I could have done more to stop things going wrong—for all of us.” Her fingers tightened on the bar. “We all make mistakes, Silas.” “But some mistakes stay with you. Don’t they?” Aurora blinked back an ache she hadn’t allowed herself to feel in years. “Yeah.” They lapsed again into silence, the kind that wasn’t emptiness but a shared space where words had no purchase. The past and present swirled between them—years of missed chances, battles survived, and wounds that only reopened in the quiet hours. Finally, Silas cleared his throat. “You look like you could use a friend.” She looked up—
really
looked up—for the first time that night, vulnerability
flicker
ing in her bright blue eyes. “I don’t know if I know how anymore.” He gave her a slow, steady look, the kind that spoke of hard-won trust. “Then maybe it’s time you remembered.” The green neon outside cast a soft glow across the shelves of worn novels and dusty bottles. Two old friends, standing on opposite edges of past and future,
began to
close the distance that time had almost erased. Silence welcomed their tentative reconciliation, the
unspoken
words mingling with the dim light, waiting for a new beginning.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:48:33.008993+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:48:33 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
91.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"he said gently, his voice a deep timbre rich with surprise and something else—longing, perhaps [gently, perhaps]"
23.7369%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1049
totalAiIsmAdverbs
8
found
0
adverb
"completely"
count
1
1
adverb
"gently"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
2
4
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
5
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
6
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"completely"
1
"gently"
2
"slowly"
3
"softly"
4
"suddenly"
5
"barely above a whisper"
6
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
42.8027%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1049
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"flicker"
count
2
1
word
"unspoken"
count
2
2
word
"weight"
count
1
3
word
"footsteps"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicker"
1
"unspoken"
2
"weight"
3
"footsteps"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"the air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
56
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
56
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
74
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
39
mean
26.23
std
18.02
cv
0.687
sampleLengths
0
59
1
81
2
26
3
71
4
60
5
16
6
33
7
32
8
19
9
33
10
30
11
12
12
18
13
9
14
30
15
15
16
24
17
34
18
7
19
23
20
19
21
42
22
13
23
18
24
14
25
38
26
6
27
16
28
11
29
27
30
11
31
8
32
14
33
40
34
13
35
17
36
8
37
20
38
56
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
56
matches
0
"was anchored"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
144
matches
(empty)
85.7217%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
848
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
40
adverbRatio
0.04716981132075472
lyAdverbCount
19
lyAdverbRatio
0.02240566037735849
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
74
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
74
mean
13.82
std
7.44
cv
0.538
sampleLengths
0
21
1
20
2
18
3
25
4
19
5
17
6
20
7
26
8
18
9
33
10
20
11
20
12
10
13
30
14
16
15
17
16
16
17
25
18
7
19
12
20
7
21
19
22
14
23
30
24
9
25
3
26
11
27
7
28
6
29
3
30
16
31
14
32
15
33
2
34
19
35
3
36
14
37
20
38
7
39
16
40
7
41
8
42
11
43
20
44
22
45
13
46
9
47
9
48
10
49
4
93.2432%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.5675675675675675
totalSentences
74
uniqueOpeners
42
18.7500%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"he said gently, his voice a deep timbre rich with surprise and something else—longing, perhaps (say gently, long)"
1
"laughed (laugh)"
2
"Spinning it between his fingers, he said, (spin say,)"
3
"he admitted, voice raw with restraint (admit, voice)"
4
"His eyes darkened with memory (darken)"
85.6424%