| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said gently [gently]" | | 1 | "He laughed softly [softly]" | | 2 | "Silas finally asked [finally]" | | 3 | "He gestured around [around]" | | 4 | "she asked suddenly [suddenly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.441 | | leniency | 0.882 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.294 | |
| 61.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1038 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "barely above a whisper" | | 6 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1038 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1023 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 824 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Silas | 5 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Aurora | 4 | | Rory | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "quite fit with the usual nocturnal hum" | | 1 | "as if crossing the threshold between memory and reality demanded care" | | 2 | "as if warming with an ember long forgotten" | | 3 | "felt like a thread pulling taut between" | | 4 | "as if sharing a secret" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.978 | | wordCount | 1023 | | matches | | 0 | "not uncomfortable but heavy with the weight of all" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 26.23 | | std | 18.02 | | cv | 0.687 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 81 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 56 |
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| 99.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.149 | | matches | | 0 | "Si was unmistakable—tall with that silver-streaked auburn hair fallen more heavily to gray these days, beard meticulously trimmed." | | 1 | "Even with the slight limp that played against his left leg—a distant wound from secrets better left buried—he carried himself with the quiet authority that spoke of a thousand battles fought in shadows." | | 2 | "It was Aurora—Rory to those who remembered her less formally." | | 3 | "“Aurora Carter,” he said gently, his voice a deep timbre rich with surprise and something else—longing, perhaps." | | 4 | "He smiled—an old, measured smile that crept slowly but reached his eyes." | | 5 | "“How long has it been?” Silas asked, eyes resting for a moment on the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—one he remembered well from the reckless scrapes of childhood." | | 6 | "Around them, The Raven’s Nest murmured—inconsequential buzz punctuated by ice clinking softly against glass." | | 7 | "Silas noted the absence of a name she didn’t speak—the one she had fled." | | 8 | "The faint limp, the signal of battles past—both his and hers—gnawed silently at the space between what was and what had become." | | 9 | "The past and present swirled between them—years of missed chances, battles survived, and wounds that only reopened in the quiet hours." | | 10 | "She looked up—really looked up—for the first time that night, vulnerability flickering in her bright blue eyes." |
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| 85.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 848 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.04716981132075472 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02240566037735849 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 13.82 | | std | 7.44 | | cv | 0.538 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 93.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5675675675675675 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 60.61% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Finally, Silas cleared his throat." |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 9.09% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 1 | "His gaze settled on the" | | 2 | "It was Aurora—Rory to those" | | 3 | "He hadn’t seen her since" | | 4 | "He approached, deliberate but cautious," | | 5 | "he said gently, his voice" | | 6 | "She looked up, startled first," | | 7 | "Her voice was steady, but" | | 8 | "He smiled—an old, measured smile" | | 9 | "Their history felt like a" | | 10 | "He pulled out the stool" | | 11 | "She exhaled, fingers brushing the" | | 12 | "He laughed softly" | | 13 | "Her eyebrows knit in a" | | 14 | "His hazel eyes searched hers" | | 15 | "She almost smiled but caught" | | 16 | "He gestured around the dim" | | 17 | "she asked suddenly, voice barely" | | 18 | "he answered with a shake" | | 19 | "She tilted her head, interpreting" |
| | ratio | 0.527 | |
| 32.73% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest breathed its" | | 1 | "Walls adorned with faded maps" | | 2 | "Aurora sat on a creaking" | | 3 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 4 | "Shoulder-length black hair hung straight," | | 5 | "The bar drawn near midnight," | | 6 | "Si was unmistakable—tall with that" | | 7 | "The silver signet ring gleamed" | | 8 | "His gaze settled on the" | | 9 | "It was Aurora—Rory to those" | | 10 | "He hadn’t seen her since" | | 11 | "He approached, deliberate but cautious," | | 12 | "he said gently, his voice" | | 13 | "She looked up, startled first," | | 14 | "Her voice was steady, but" | | 15 | "He smiled—an old, measured smile" | | 16 | "Their history felt like a" | | 17 | "He pulled out the stool" | | 18 | "Silas asked, eyes resting for" | | 19 | "She exhaled, fingers brushing the" |
| | ratio | 0.855 | |
| 90.91% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Even with the slight limp" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest breathed its usual low sigh beneath the green neon flicker that hovered like a ghost above the doorframe." | | 1 | "Shoulder-length black hair hung straight, framing a face that had been both resolutely shut and quietly searching these past months." | | 2 | "Even with the slight limp that played against his left leg—a distant wound from secrets better left buried—he carried himself with the quiet authority that spok…" | | 3 | "He approached, deliberate but cautious, as if crossing the threshold between memory and reality demanded care." | | 4 | "He gave her a slow, steady look, the kind that spoke of hard-won trust." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled, fingers brushing the scar reflexively" | | 1 | "Silas finally asked, voice lowered as if sharing a secret" | | 2 | "she asked suddenly, voice barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "he admitted, voice raw with restraint" |
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| 91.18% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "He laughed softly (laugh)" | | 1 | "he admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |