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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR6FJVXS52ZGC8D64DYWQJ
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Model:
GPT-4.1 Mini
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
20.5s
Cost:
$0.002399
Provider:
OpenAI
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The neon green glow of The Raven’s Nest bled over the cracked pavement, casting long, sickly shadows beneath the
flicker
ing sign. Inside, the air was redolent with the heavy scent of aged wood, spilled whiskey, and the faintest trace of old cigarette smoke — an aroma as familiar to Silas Blackwood as the well-worn bar stool he occupied each evening. His hazel eyes, sharp despite the years, scanned the room with a casual vigilance, the way a retired intelligence man always did. The clink of glasses and low murmur of conversation formed a murky backdrop to his thoughts. He had barely glanced up when the door creaked open again. A rush of colder air brushed in, carrying with it a scent that pricked at some buried corner of his memory — faint, evocative, like a sweet refrain half-forgotten. She stepped inside, tentative at first, like a shadow slipping quietly into a dim room. Silas’s gaze caught the movement before his mind fully registered. There was something about the sharp line of her jaw, that brightness in her eyes, and the way she carried herself with cautious resolve. She was taller now, almost a head above the last image he’d kept of her, but her presence cleaved through the haze of years with undeniable clarity. Aurora Carter. When she met his eyes, her own — bright blue and sharp as a hawk’s —
flickered
on recognition. The years peeled away in that silent exchange: the girl who had once barged into his bar on a whim, full of ire and dreams, and the woman standing now, poised yet guarded, marked by the quiet
weight
of
unspoken
things. The small crescent scar visible on her wrist, encroached only
slightly
by the sleeve of her jacket, grounded her in the moment. She hadn’t changed entirely. His half-smile
was measured
, the sort that invited yet kept a safe distance. “Aurora,” he said, voice low and steady, as if willing the name not to shatter beneath the strain of memory. “It’s been a while.” She nodded, hesitant, then took a slow step forward. “Si.” Her voice carried the trace of a soft accent, the undertone of the city she’d fled to but never fully belonged in. “I wasn’t sure this was still your place.” Silas gestured toward the stool beside him, the bar’s lacquered surface
gleaming
dimly under the hanging lights. “It is. Same chair, same bourbon. Unless you’re bringing me something stronger tonight.” She smiled briefly, a
flicker
of something subdued decades deep. Sliding onto the stool, she folded her hands on the counter, the scar catching the light for a heartbeat. “Stronger might be necessary.” They sat in a precarious silence, an interlude filled with ghosts neither dared name. The pressure of time pressed down — all those days lost, all the words left unsaid, the mistakes that tangled around their histories like thick roots beneath the ground. “What are you doing here, Rory?” Silas asked
softly
, the nickname slipping from years ago with a gentleness that surprised them both. Her gaze dipped briefly to their hands, as if searching for certainty in skin. “I… I’m staying nearby now. Got a flat above your bar, actually.” She laughed
lightly
— more brittle than joyful. “Small world.” He let the comment hang. The space between them was heavy with the ghosts of shared pasts and the burdens they’d carried anew. “You changed,” she said quietly, eyes searching his face for something beneath the careful composure. “Not just the bar. You.” Silas traced the silver signet ring on his right hand, a talisman worn through years of secrets and soft regrets. “Life
does that. One
wrong step, and the landscape shifts. You know that.” Her fingers curled around the handle of her glass, knuckles white. “I do. I ran from one kind of wrong step. But some roads… they catch up, no matter how fast you run.” He caught the
flicker
of pain in her eyes, sharper than any scar. “You left without a word,” he said, voice low, reminding but not accusing. “No goodbye. I thought you’d vanished.” Her breath hitched, and for a moment the armor she’d worn for years cracked. “I was scared,” she admitted, voice barely louder than the murmur surrounding them. “Scared of what I was becoming. And scared I’d lose everyone who mattered.” “No one’s lost forever,” Silas said, though it sounded like a platitude even to his own ears. The wariness between them didn’t dissipate, but it morphed — a fragile bridge built on shared histories and mutual respect. They were no longer the reckless youths who had dreamed too big; time had tempered them into something quieter, more guarded. “But we’re not the same people,” she said, tone almost wistful. “You took on the world and carried its
weight
. I ran from it — from him.” Her voice caught, the ghosts of Evan hanging in the room like a cold fog. Silas reached out, just briefly, fingertips brushing the scar on her wrist. “You’re stronger than you know, Rory. I’ve been watching.” Her eyes met his again, fierce and tired all at once. “Maybe. Or maybe I’m just tired of pretending. That’s why I’m here. To start over. To stop running.” The bar hummed
softly
around them, a
sanctuary
and a cage. Silas nodded. “Well, you’ve got an ally in me. This place is yours, too — if you want it.” For the first time that night, Aurora let herself breathe. The tension eased from her shoulders, if only a fraction. “Thanks, Silas.” She paused, then shared a hesitant smile. “It’s good to see you again.” “Likewise, Rory. Let’s hope the next time, it’s not so many years.” Outside, the neon sign buzzed insistently, a reminder that time didn’t stop — but tonight, within the warm, dim walls of The Raven’s Nest, two old friends had found their way back to each other, stitched together by the invisible threads of long silence and the fragile promise of forgiveness.
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2/17/2026, 2:52:35 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
8.3333%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"she said quietly, eyes searching his face for something beneath the careful composure [quietly]"
1
"she admitted, voice barely louder than the murmur surrounding them [barely]"
2
"she said, tone almost wistful [almost]"
59.7586%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
994
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"softly"
count
2
highlights
0
"lightly"
1
"slightly"
2
"softly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
19.5171%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
994
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"flicker"
count
2
3
word
"gleaming"
count
1
4
word
"unspoken"
count
1
5
word
"weight"
count
2
highlights
0
"sanctuary"
1
"flickered"
2
"flicker"
3
"gleaming"
4
"unspoken"
5
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
49
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
49
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
64
matches
0
"does that. One"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
27
mean
37.07
std
20.52
cv
0.554
sampleLengths
0
98
1
40
2
76
3
2
4
86
5
37
6
40
7
30
8
33
9
43
10
22
11
36
12
23
13
20
14
33
15
33
16
32
17
40
18
17
19
41
20
42
21
21
22
29
23
30
24
35
25
12
26
50
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
49
matches
0
"was measured"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
119
matches
(empty)
90.3329%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
786
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
37
adverbRatio
0.047073791348600506
lyAdverbCount
19
lyAdverbRatio
0.024173027989821884
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
64
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
64
mean
15.64
std
9.22
cv
0.589
sampleLengths
0
21
1
39
2
22
3
16
4
11
5
29
6
15
7
10
8
24
9
27
10
2
11
19
12
41
13
22
14
4
15
13
16
20
17
4
18
9
19
23
20
8
21
17
22
13
23
10
24
19
25
4
26
14
27
29
28
22
29
14
30
20
31
2
32
5
33
18
34
15
35
5
36
20
37
13
38
11
39
22
40
13
41
13
42
6
43
14
44
13
45
13
46
17
47
20
48
21
49
11
79.1667%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.484375
totalSentences
64
uniqueOpeners
31
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"he said, voice low and steady, as if willing the name not to shatter beneath the strain of memory (say, voice will shatter)"
1
"laughed (laugh)"
2
"she said quietly, eyes searching his face for something beneath the careful composure (say quietly, search)"
3
"he said, voice low, reminding but not accusing (say, voice does not accuse)"
4
"she admitted, voice barely louder than the murmur surrounding them (admit, voice barely surround)"
5
"Silas said, though it sounded like a platitude even to his own ears (say, sound like)"
6
"she said, tone almost wistful (say, tone almost)"
79.8299%