| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 71.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1063 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "sharply" | | 5 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1063 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "fractured" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "sentinels" | | 12 | "reminder" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "could feel" | | 17 | "pulse" | | 18 | "footfall" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1044 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1037 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 9 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Rory | 9 | | Aurora | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 77.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if warning her not to trust what she saw—or what she didn’t" | | 1 | "as if warning her this night was far from over" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.874 | | wordCount | 1044 | | matches | | 0 | "not from fear, but the odd sensation of being watched" | | 1 | "Not words but a breath, a hiss curling around her name: “Laila" | | 2 | "not afraid,\" she told the dark, voice tight but steady" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 29.83 | | std | 16.77 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 18 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.217 | | matches | | 0 | "But from the moment she crossed the threshold, something niggled deep in her chest—a sense that even the familiar was fractured here, warped by the Grove’s otherness." | | 1 | "Richmond Park’s usual night sounds—the distant hum of traffic, an occasional bark—were strangled, swallowed by thick shadows and leaves that whispered in a voice she didn’t understand." | | 2 | "Tonight, it felt muted, reluctant—as if something was blocking the usual gentle energy." | | 3 | "Eva’s voice had dragged her through memories darker than the Grove itself; whispered secrets that only this liminal place could reveal." | | 4 | "A crack echoed somewhere to her left—a dry, brittle sound, like twig snapping underfoot." | | 5 | "The faintest flicker—something at the edge of her vision—made her blink and look again." | | 6 | "If there was a portal here, if the pendant was right, then she could protect herself—or find a way back if the Grove decided to hold her." | | 7 | "As she moved deeper, a faint melody filtered through the air—delicate, like music played on cracked glass." | | 8 | "Her eyes caught slight movement again—a shimmer between the branches, faint like vapour, dissolving before she could focus." | | 9 | "Behind her, a rustling sound—heavy, deliberate—made her spin." | | 10 | "The scar on her left wrist itched faintly, a dull reminder of things past, as if warning her not to trust what she saw—or what she didn’t." | | 11 | "The air grew thick; the sweet melody twisted into a low, guttural hum threading through the branches." | | 12 | "Rory’s skin crawled, the sensation of eyes—many eyes—fixed on her from the shadows." | | 13 | "No one except Eva—and maybe the Grove itself." | | 14 | "The clearing was empty—or should have been." | | 15 | "For the shortest moment, their eyes met—black pits that swallowed light, ancient and hungry." | | 16 | "The air thickened; the plants bent away as if repelled." | | 17 | "Rory blinked—and the Grove was behind her, silent and still." |
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| 90.34% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1058 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.05103969754253308 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01984877126654064 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 12.58 | | std | 6.58 | | cv | 0.523 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 56.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3614457831325301 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 42.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a whisper, just beyond" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced behind her." | | 1 | "It pulsed faintly, a soft," | | 2 | "She glanced down." | | 3 | "Her breath came slightly faster," | | 4 | "She wasn’t entirely alone here," | | 5 | "She’d come for a reason." | | 6 | "She tried to focus, told" | | 7 | "She turned slowly, eyes scanning" | | 8 | "Her voice was little more" | | 9 | "She forced herself to take" | | 10 | "It watched, and waited." | | 11 | "It teased the edges of" | | 12 | "Her eyes caught slight movement" | | 13 | "She blinked, heart quickening." | | 14 | "Her voice was firmer this" | | 15 | "Her breath hitched." | | 16 | "She moved with care, feet" | | 17 | "Her blood turned to ice." | | 18 | "She hadn’t told anyone she" | | 19 | "She could feel the Grove’s" |
| | ratio | 0.291 | |
| 54.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped cautiously through" | | 1 | "The clearing opened before her" | | 2 | "She glanced behind her." | | 3 | "Richmond Park’s usual night sounds—the" | | 4 | "The standing stones loomed behind" | | 5 | "Rory took a breath, trying" | | 6 | "It pulsed faintly, a soft," | | 7 | "Tonight, it felt muted, reluctant—as" | | 8 | "She glanced down." | | 9 | "The deep crimson gem hung" | | 10 | "Her breath came slightly faster," | | 11 | "She wasn’t entirely alone here," | | 12 | "The idea pulled at her" | | 13 | "She’d come for a reason." | | 14 | "Eva’s voice had dragged her" | | 15 | "A place where the veil" | | 16 | "The clearing felt smaller as" | | 17 | "The wildflowers leaned in, petals" | | 18 | "She tried to focus, told" | | 19 | "A crack echoed somewhere to" |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 72.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park’s usual night sounds—the distant hum of traffic, an occasional bark—were strangled, swallowed by thick shadows and leaves that whispered in a voic…" | | 1 | "Tonight, it felt muted, reluctant—as if something was blocking the usual gentle energy." | | 2 | "For the shortest moment, their eyes met—black pits that swallowed light, ancient and hungry." | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed again, almost violently, as if desperate to draw her back to the real world." | | 4 | "She exhaled, chest tight but unbroken, the scar on her wrist prickling as if warning her this night was far from over." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she told, voice tight but steady" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |