| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the whisper came again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 66.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1057 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "deliberately" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1057 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "unraveling" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "tangible" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "quickened" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "down her spine" | | 17 | "uncanny" | | 18 | "glint" | | 19 | "echoing" | | 20 | "delve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A shiver ran down her spine" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1045 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1036 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 9 | | Eva | 2 | | Rory | 5 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Answer | 1 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Earth" | | 5 | "Answer" | | 6 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite hear" | | 1 | "not quite her own" | | 2 | "appeared unchanged stationary sentinels indifferent to her intrusion" | | 3 | "whites that seemed to pulse softly under the stars" |
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| 8.61% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.914 | | wordCount | 1045 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the usual chirps of insects or night birds, but a low" | | 1 | "not in words, but in a slow, deliberate movement" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 41.8 | | std | 22.43 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 99 | | 1 | 87 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 80 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 40 |
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| 91.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was conditioned" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "was playing" | | 1 | "were wrapping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.205 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here deliberately, despite the stories—and despite Eva’s warnings." | | 1 | "She had to find it—the place Eva had described only cryptically, the thing no one else seemed to remember." | | 2 | "The sound was gone—or maybe it had never really been there." | | 3 | "Rory blinked, and when her eyes refocused she caught the flicker of movement—something at the edge of her vision, darker than the night itself." | | 4 | "She was conditioned for this — clear thinking over wild fear — but in the quiet dampness beneath ancient branches, logic thinned." | | 5 | "A single petal drifted down like a feather, landing softly on her wrist near the small crescent scar from childhood—an old reminder of pain survived." | | 6 | "The trees appeared unchanged—stationary sentinels indifferent to her intrusion." | | 7 | "For a moment she thought she saw a flicker of movement—a glimpse of something with no clear shape, framed by shards of moonlight through the branches." | | 8 | "She reminded herself of the rational—she was simply in a place where time played tricks, shadows shifted oddly." | | 9 | "Yet when she stepped forward again, branches brushing her shoulders like cold fingers, a quiet sound echoed from the standing stones—a low thrum that vibrated against the soles of her boots." | | 10 | "The crimson gem’s faint glow brightened—warmth spilling into the hollow of her palm." | | 11 | "She forced herself to stop—sharp inhale." | | 12 | "Shapes coalesced where the wildflowers darkened to black clusters—figures, almost human but their forms melting like smoke, shifting with the dark." | | 13 | "Aurora’s bright blue eyes caught the faint glint of silver where one figure’s gaze locked with hers—a flicker of something ancient and knowing." | | 14 | "The standing stones behind her groaned—a sound like old wood settling or bone grinding." | | 15 | "The air grew thick; time warped once more." |
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| 92.46% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1049 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.04861773117254528 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01811248808388942 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 13.4 | | std | 7.82 | | cv | 0.584 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 55.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3717948717948718 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 88.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a second, then gone." | | 1 | "Then, with unnatural grace, they" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here deliberately," | | 1 | "She brushed a lock of" | | 2 | "She had to find it—the" | | 3 | "She could feel that clarity" | | 4 | "She paused, heart ticking up" | | 5 | "Her breath puffed white in" | | 6 | "She shook her head, telling" | | 7 | "She was conditioned for this" | | 8 | "She allowed herself a brief" | | 9 | "Her fingers tightened on the" | | 10 | "It was there, and then" | | 11 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 12 | "She shook off the mounting" | | 13 | "She reminded herself of the" | | 14 | "She squeezed the pendant between" | | 15 | "It felt insistent, urgent." | | 16 | "She quickened her pace, stepping" | | 17 | "She forced herself to stop—sharp" | | 18 | "She was prey." |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 53.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter’s boots crunched against" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She had come here deliberately," | | 3 | "The Grove had a way" | | 4 | "The moon hung high, pale" | | 5 | "Every step forward felt heavier." | | 6 | "She brushed a lock of" | | 7 | "The deep crimson of the" | | 8 | "She had to find it—the" | | 9 | "A pocket between worlds, where" | | 10 | "Aurora had spent months chasing" | | 11 | "She could feel that clarity" | | 12 | "An almost imperceptible rustle caught" | | 13 | "She paused, heart ticking up" | | 14 | "Nothing moved in the thick" | | 15 | "The sound was gone—or maybe" | | 16 | "Her breath puffed white in" | | 17 | "Rory blinked, and when her" | | 18 | "She shook her head, telling" | | 19 | "She was conditioned for this" |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 55.39% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung high, pale and wan, casting skeletal shadows across the ground, shadows that looked too long, too twisted for the shapes that birthed them." | | 1 | "She shook her head, telling herself the Grove was playing tricks." | | 2 | "The Grove’s air felt viscous, as if resistance itself were wrapping around her limbs." | | 3 | "Yet when she stepped forward again, branches brushing her shoulders like cold fingers, a quiet sound echoed from the standing stones—a low thrum that vibrated a…" | | 4 | "Here, the wildflowers bloomed with uncanny brilliance: midnight blues, fiery reds, and ghostly whites that seemed to pulse softly under the stars." | | 5 | "Shapes coalesced where the wildflowers darkened to black clusters—figures, almost human but their forms melting like smoke, shifting with the dark." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "the whisper came again, this time distinctly at her left ear, breath-cold" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |