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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRCR8MG1MQ340MGFGJ8466
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Model:
GPT-4.1 Mini
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
21.1s
Cost:
$0.002427
Provider:
OpenAI
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
Aurora Carter’s boots crunched against the leaf litter, muffled beneath the distant haze of city noise yet sharp in the quiet night of the Fae Grove. The ancient oak standing stones rose like
sentinels
, their gnarled limbs carved out by time and superstition, framing the entrance to this hidden enclave. She had come here
deliberately
, despite the stories—and despite Eva’s warnings. The Grove had a way of luring people in, promises tangled in the wildflower scent that forever clung to the air, but Rory felt an unease curling low in her belly the moment she stepped through the boundary. The moon hung high, pale and wan, casting skeletal shadows across the ground, shadows that looked too long, too twisted for the shapes that birthed them. E
very
step forward felt heavier. She brushed a lock of straight black hair behind her ear and slid a hand beneath her jacket, fingers closing around the Heartstone Pendant resting against her chest. The deep crimson of the gem was muted beneath the silver chain, but it pulsed faintly against her skin, a reminder she wasn’t entirely lost here. Not yet. She had to find it—the place Eva had described only cryptically, the thing no one else
seemed to
remember. A pocket between worlds, where time bent and secret things waited in silence. Aurora had spent months chasing leads,
unraveling
old folklore before waking up with a sudden clarity this
very
night. She could
feel that clarity
fading now, replaced by sharp threads of something darker threading through the stillness. An almost imperceptible rustle caught her attention near one of the massive oaks. She paused, heart ticking up a notch. Nothing moved in the thick shadows aside from the slow sway of wildflower stems. The sound
was gone
—or maybe it had never
really
been there. Her breath puffed white in the cool night, quick and shallow. Rory blinked, and when her eyes refocused she caught the
flicker
of movement—something at the edge of her vision, darker than the night itself. Just a second, then gone. She shook her head, telling herself the Grove
was playing
tricks. She
was conditioned
for this — clear thinking over wild fear — but in the quiet dampness beneath ancient branches, logic thinned. With a steadying breath, she moved deeper into the Grove, the musk of earth and blossom thick around her. The wildflowers, impossibly vibrant even in the pale moonlight,
seemed to
lean in, mouths of petals whispering secrets she couldn’t quite hear. A single petal drifted down like a feather, landing
softly
on her wrist near the small crescent scar from childhood—an old reminder of pain survived. She allowed herself a brief focus on the scar, the
tangible
fact of it. The ambient hum of the city
was gone
now, swallowed by the Grove’s unnatural silence. But beneath the quiet, a different sound surfaced. Not the usual chirps of insects or night birds, but a low and steady pulse, like the slow beat of a distant drum. Her fingers tightened on the Heartstone. The small pendant held its faint warmth longer, now pulsing
deliberately
, coaxing her toward some unseen locus. Another sound surfaced, this time a whisper. So faint it could have been the wind through leaves. Or the shuffle of
footsteps
not quite her own. Aurora turned
sharply
, eyes scanning the dark. The trees appeared unchanged—stationary
sentinels
indifferent to her intrusion. Yet the feeling of being watched, small hairs prickling along her neck, told a different story. For a moment she thought she saw a
flicker
of movement—a glimpse of something with no clear shape, framed by shards of moonlight through the branches. It was there, and then it wasn’t. Her pulse quickened. The Grove’s air felt viscous, as if resistance itself
were wrapping
around her limbs. She shook off the mounting dread. Not ghosts, not spectres. She reminded herself of the rational—she was simply in a place where time played tricks, shadows shifted oddly. Nothing more. Yet when she stepped forward again, branches brushing her shoulders like cold fingers, a quiet sound
echoed
from the standing stones—a low thrum that vibrated against the soles of her boots. A vibration that wasn’t natural. She squeezed the pendant between her fingers. The crimson gem’s faint glow brightened—warmth spilling into the hollow of her palm. It felt insistent, urgent. "You’re not alone," the whisper came again, this time distinctly at her left ear, breath-cold. Rory whipped her head around. Nothing met her gaze but dark trunks and moonlit leaves.
A shiver ran down her spine
. She quickened her pace, stepping beyond the last stone into the Grove’s heart. Here, the wildflowers bloomed with
uncanny
brilliance: midnight blues, fiery reds, and ghostly whites that
seemed to
pulse
softly
under the stars. Time stretched in the silence. What on Earth should have been minutes ticked into something heavier, more distorted. Rory’s breath clouded before her, the beat of her heart loud in her ears. The shadows shifted again, closer now, something scraping just beyond the edge of sight. She forced herself to stop—sharp inhale. “Who’s there?” The words sounded brittle, swallowed immediately by the dense night. Answer came not in words, but in a slow, deliberate movement. Shapes coalesced where the wildflowers darkened to black clusters—figures, almost human but their forms melting like smoke, shifting with the dark. Aurora’s bright blue eyes caught the faint
glint
of silver where one figure’s gaze locked with hers—a
flicker
of something ancient and knowing. The standing stones behind her groaned—a sound like old wood settling or bone grinding. The air grew thick; time warped once more. The Heartstone pulsed wildly now, beats
echoing
in the stillness. Rory’s fingers curled around it, desperate to hold to its warmth. “What do you want?” she whispered. The figures stilled. Then, with unnatural grace, they melted back into the shadows, leaving only the trembling wildflowers behind. Aurora exhaled, her breath shaky. The Grove had shown its face and turned away. The wrongness lingered, a presence that hummed beneath the skin of the night. And Aurora Carter knew, with crushing certainty, that her e
very
step forward would be a deeper
delve
into a world where light bent and darkness breathed. Alone in the Grove, she was no longer just a visitor. She was prey.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"the whisper came again, this time distinctly at her left ear, breath-cold [again, distinctly]"
33.8374%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1058
totalAiIsmAdverbs
7
found
0
adverb
"deliberately"
count
2
1
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
2
adverb
"softly"
count
2
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
4
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"deliberately"
1
"sharply"
2
"softly"
3
"really"
4
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1058
totalAiIsms
13
found
0
word
"tangible"
count
1
1
word
"sentinels"
count
2
2
word
"flicker"
count
3
3
word
"glint"
count
1
4
word
"uncanny"
count
1
5
word
"footsteps"
count
1
6
word
"delve"
count
1
7
word
"echoed"
count
1
8
word
"echoing"
count
1
9
word
"unraveling"
count
1
highlights
0
"tangible"
1
"sentinels"
2
"flicker"
3
"glint"
4
"uncanny"
5
"footsteps"
6
"delve"
7
"echoed"
8
"echoing"
9
"unraveling"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"shiver down spine"
count
1
highlights
0
"A shiver ran down her spine"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
78
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
78
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
78
matches
0
"feel that clarity"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
25
mean
41.8
std
22.43
cv
0.537
sampleLengths
0
99
1
87
2
69
3
56
4
62
5
80
6
46
7
23
8
26
9
32
10
33
11
47
12
36
13
24
14
30
15
41
16
46
17
18
18
32
19
45
20
21
21
6
22
19
23
27
24
40
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
78
matches
0
"was gone"
1
"was conditioned"
2
"was gone"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
151
matches
0
"was playing"
1
"were wrapping"
92.4595%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1049
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
51
adverbRatio
0.04861773117254528
lyAdverbCount
19
lyAdverbRatio
0.01811248808388942
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
78
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
78
mean
13.4
std
7.82
cv
0.584
sampleLengths
0
26
1
24
2
11
3
38
4
26
5
5
6
28
7
26
8
2
9
19
10
13
11
19
12
18
13
13
14
7
15
14
16
11
17
11
18
24
19
5
20
11
21
22
22
19
23
22
24
25
25
14
26
15
27
8
28
23
29
6
30
17
31
7
32
10
33
9
34
7
35
9
36
16
37
26
38
7
39
3
40
14
41
6
42
4
43
18
44
2
45
31
46
5
47
7
48
13
49
4
55.5556%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.3717948717948718
totalSentences
78
uniqueOpeners
29
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"the whisper came again, this time distinctly at her left ear, breath-cold (come again, leave)"
1
"whispered (whisper)"
75.4031%